Hindsight.
It’s a wonderful thing.
I think, given my life, I should be honoured a doctorate in hindsight.
In recall, the first half is neon like in my memory. It’s slow, that memory. Like millions and millions of still shots, a slow motion replay. Every second took an age, the day I remember clearly, second by second.
It is afternoon, he comes home from work early. As always of late, he looks tired, harassed. Absently, he starts folding the washing as I clean up the spilled sugar on the floor, from master 8.
I can see his face; it’s frozen in time, he stares at a fitted sheet like it has sprung from an alien. I see the puzzlement on his face, as he attempts to put the elasticised ends together… the frown, the crease, then…
I am upside down in the pantry. I am cursing the sweet granules as they continue to escape my efforts. It’s 3.15 PM, and I hear the gate give it’s soft, bell like clink that it does as it closes, or when the cat jumps over it. A flittered thought of the cat, off for an adventure. Crunch crunch – more granules. I look up. He has gone from my sight, I think perhaps to the shed, to the yard, to the garden?
The elasticated sheet lies abandoned on the island bench.
I don’t bother looking for him. Men wander off whilst doing ‘stuff’ all the time, yes?
I had no idea at that stage that my life was about to change – for always.
At 6.30 PM it occurs to me that I have not seen him in a while. Unaccustomed to having him home, it just didn’t occur to me that he was anywhere. I am used to the space shared with a child, not an adult. But yes – it has been a few hours… I call his name, no answer. I feed master 8, thinking, as oft I do, how he has wandered off to a neighbours, the man over the back, or to Mr Fisherman across the street.
I sigh, feed the child, put a meal in the refrigerator. The nightly ritual of bathing, reading a story, feeding animals and cleaning the kitchen occupies mind space for a while.
7.30 PM. Child is settled, I am showered… and from somewhere deep in mind I acknowledge there is just a niggle of worry. If only I had started working in that PhD about then.
It’s 8.30 PM. I am starting to get cross.
For some reason, my eyes move to the front door.
There, neatly together side by side, are his work boots and socks.
I ring his mobile – and as I hear his mobile ringing back at me from the office down the hall, I start to feel scared. I walk to the office – and this is where the freeze frames really slow down – I can almost see myself walking there, slowly, receiver in my hand listening to the ringing tone, and the sound of his own phone ringing at me from the office. There, in the office, in a pile, I find his phone, his watch, his keys, and neatly bundled together, all his ID.
Sitting underneath it, is a pile of his paperwork, his diary, his notes. My husband has vanished, and anything that links him to me, to master 8 or to our life is sitting here looking at me.









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November 14, 2009 at 9:30 pm
Fe
Oh My God. I can’t even begin to imagine how awful that must have been.
Can’t wait for the next installment.
xoxoxoxo
November 14, 2009 at 10:29 pm
Sunny Road Mum
Oh, I don’t know what to say. The suspense….the way you describe it, I can feel that dread in the pit of my stomach. xoxo
November 14, 2009 at 11:17 pm
MissyBoo
I’m feeling dread too… Can you please post Part 2 quickly, I cannot bare the suspense.
xoxox
November 15, 2009 at 5:47 am
Sarah
I don’t know what to say and wait with abated breath for the outcome. Such a painful experience for you and tragic for your husband to have reached such a level of despair. Life is too hard sometimes.
November 15, 2009 at 6:02 am
Alyson
I know how hard this is for you when it gives me such chills. You write so well Rhu, even about such tricky topics. Lots of Love, AL
November 15, 2009 at 6:58 am
fifi
How horribly frightening….
November 15, 2009 at 7:27 am
bushbabe
*Holding breath*
November 15, 2009 at 8:16 am
Alison
I can only liken that to hearing the screeching tires and crunching metal over the phone when I was talking to M.
I am holding my breath for a better outcome.
November 15, 2009 at 10:38 am
dancingwithfrogs
I’ve had that moment… just recently.
November 15, 2009 at 11:13 am
Melinda
Truly scary! I am hoping the next installment brings relief and not despair.
November 15, 2009 at 12:49 pm
Gemisht
OMG I am speechless and holding my breath at the same time. Waiting impatiently now for the next installment.
November 15, 2009 at 1:13 pm
Jayne
It’s a heart-stopping moment (((hugs)))
November 15, 2009 at 3:29 pm
peppermintpatcher
Without a doubt that is a life changing moment.
November 15, 2009 at 3:40 pm
debby
Oh, no. You get right back to this computer and tell us what happened next.
November 15, 2009 at 4:20 pm
Tracey
Whoa….
November 15, 2009 at 9:37 pm
mary
I know your writing.
I know it is amazing.
I am now not sure whether this is a true story.
Or not.
I will wait and see.
x
November 16, 2009 at 11:06 am
peskypixies
my heart is pounding……………..
hugs
November 16, 2009 at 2:04 pm
Maureen
I’m just hoping that this isn’t a true story.
I’m not used to these kinds of stories. My day is filled with people battling with each other, some refusing to leave the matrimonial home. Rarely is it that silence and emptiness is discovered.
November 16, 2009 at 2:20 pm
rhubarb
Maureen, this is indeed a true story. Each episode is from my journal, re-written to remove (too much) of the emotion I included at the time.
I have often pondered on writing this story, but the time was not right.
On this, the anniversary of the incident, it seemed like time.
I am writing for me, of course, and even as I read the journal and rewrite it, I can feel the emotions I felt and the experience the confusion.
It may take several parts to tell the whole story.
Sorry about that.
November 16, 2009 at 9:48 pm
Laura
[[[[[SHudder]]]]]
And…..?
November 17, 2009 at 5:35 am
silfert
*eyes closed and waiting*
November 17, 2009 at 7:13 am
Aunty Evil
Write faster! I haven’t breathed out since i read this a few days ago!
November 17, 2009 at 9:15 am
meggie
It is like reading a worst fear confirmation. Though, I am sure not many would have a fear of such a scenario.
Strength for the writing of the remainder.XX
November 17, 2009 at 3:29 pm
persiflage
Oh Rhubarb, what awful and dreadful things happen.
November 17, 2009 at 10:21 pm
Tracy
Fairly biting nails here… Part Two? Phuleeezzz…